Sure. If that will help you into making it better but also to make sure Im liking it, and just make your job easier

Alrighty ive done some thought about it and ive finished up the sketch for at least from her neck up. Though I want to run some things over with you!

Also, sorry about the wait !! Feel free to make any requests for changes so far :)

I kinda took regular Artoria’s hair color (a gold-ish brown in most arts) and mixed it with a whiter/pale yellow tone so.. Lmk if you like this hair color!

As for her other physical traits, Morgan and Lartoria have a kind of cat-eye shaped feature that Artoria (saber) doesn’t. To make her look a *bit* older than saber toria but younger than lartoria I gave her the same eyeshape for the most part.. but not fully. Lartoria’s eyelashes match her haircolor so I kinda took that from her .

Also, I didn’t really know what to do for her hairstyle so I kinda just extended the hair that frames her face but not to the long degree that Lartoria has .

I really like the idea of her having scars ! I didn’t want to go overboard with it but off your description I drew a neck-area scar. I gave her a cheek scar too since there wasnt rlly a specific area you had in mind for a scar on her face iirc

Next ill be working on her attire and such but id like to know what you think so far of her purely physical appearance !! im assuming she doesnt have any accessories like Lartoria’s crown thing or even the ahoge ?

Maybe make the eye color a bit more blueish. Like, that it's still green but you can kinda see it has a bit of cyan in it since Lancer Artoria has some and she is older version in a way but i want mine to have still those green eyes but with kinda noticable cyan color, even if a bit, but not like Lancer Artoria's, that kinda mix that when you look at Saber and Lancer, you can see the difference in eye color that Saber's are green and Lancer's are mix of green but visible cyan in it.

Yeah, I like the hair and such. My only issue would be to maybe just give neck scar a bit higher, just a bit since I like how it looks on her.

And that's all. Btw, I may not answer from 6th to 16th this month due to going on the vacation during that to this time

Hey @RunawayKotarou Im back from the vacation. Also came to see how is everything going (Also sorry for ping again, Dragon Emperor)

Yoooo. Im currently out but I have more sketches n stuff that ill send in a while bc i cant access em rn! welcome back

Alr

Hello. How are ya?

Heyyy hey. My week was actually really cramped (i procrastinated on over 150 assignments but i got em all done)

Alas here are some of the sketches ive done:

I was trying to just gather my thoughts about her outfit here— so its pretty messy. I thought well, red is a pretty stand-out color for someone like Artoria. Lartoria has this kind of red cape that I thought would be cool to add — it definitely is reminscent of a king. But ehh it kinda clashes too much (same with the gold accents, while theyre definitely something I think of when it comes to kings and artoria, i think this particular design we’re working on should differ a bit from leaning into the typical artoria traits)

Whiich brings me to my second sketch

2.

This ones definitely more reminiscent of Morgan at least color scheme wise (And also Gray, who I think is a great reference for Artoria’s traits. I mostly had her in mind here) Its more cool toned like how your first message about her design mentioned (silver, white, a kind of blue color) I intend on giving her pants but also maintaining the part of Saber artoria’s design outlined in red here:

So excluding the skirt, basically.

Sorry for the inconvenient wait again! i was also out on vacation and i neglected to mention it rip. Lmk what you think !

It's okay, you had vacations and other assignments. Artists have to rest or do other things sometimes.

Anyways. So, first sketch pretty awesome, mainly the cape that, as weird as it may sound, would fit for the second sketch, though I wouldnt be surprised if you want to change color or smth but I would kinda keep it. It just fits for her a lot. Even if she takes it off or smth during the fight and maybe uses it as kinda second weapon somehow. (I mean, it is a cape. You can probably wrap it around the weapon and hand of the enemy and, yk)

Second sketch, looks way more I described and it's BEAUTIFUL! Like, VERY BEAUTIFUL. Especially the fur, it fits so well on her design. Though Im not sure what those symbols on both sketches are, I suspect it's something but I overall, I LOVE that second sketch

Also to remind you since it's been, but only if you want you can drew her sword, her kinda main sword that is like her main one. You know, "basically Caliburn reforged after being broken in battle with that one king and with it, to be more powerful to the level of her 2 other powerful weapons, if not stronger sometimes. I thought of it have more lighter and more heavenly-like color pattern, having especially pink leaf-like pattern on the handle or akin to that."

Though again, you can draw it on her art if you want but if you wanted to, you can try to draw your own look for it since I can understand it would have been probably hard to draw it from my description a bit but keep pink leaf thing especially since it's important to her character, at least the connection she has with someone.